Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
work satisfaction in uk and in italy
Work satisfaction in UK and in Italy
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
This words can be replaced with:various
differentFirst
, according both to the international and national contest; second, the places where employees work and, last This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butAs far as the
first
point is concerned
, it is to be noticed
that the European economy is currently
suffering from a general crisis, causing relevant damages both to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companiesThese
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
eventsindeed
, when it This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comeson the other hand
. Moreover
, these This words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis is why,
besides
an uncertain future, employees would rather
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keepThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
currentSpeaking of the second point, employees
usually
take in great account the relationships they build up with their colleagues or managers. These features are essential in order to enjoy Possible spelling mistake found.work time
worktimeFor instance
, it is not that uncommon for someone to be afraid of being fired
whenever they try to complain about something, which leads them to avoid situations where they try to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getEventually
, they This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
endLastly
, the third point concerns a suitable salary according to the position and to the time spent on work.To sum up, an equal and right salary is what
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makesPossible spelling mistake. 'organisations' is British English.organizations
organisationsBesides
, This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companiesThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someusually
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
seeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuated
stressed6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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