
Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
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People’s lives are becoming increasingly stressful nowadays and there are many reasons behind this. Many people relate this to technological advancement while others say that high living costs and competitions are the main reasons for this stressful life we have.
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good6.5
Total Band
7
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement