Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work.
Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why? Keywords: technology
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Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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