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today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work.

Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why? Keywords: technology
Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why? Keywords: technology
These days, due to
many
technological advancements robots have become a part of our life. We are using them both in our personal and professional life.
But
, In my opinion it had brought both pros and cons in our daily life.

Firstly
, to
make
man
things easy robots
were invented
. They can perform multitasking
quickly
,
efficiently
and never
get
tired. In this running
world
, as there is no
enough
time to perform every task in home and office,
people
are employing robots to complete their tasks. They can clean, cook etc.
,
regarding household activities and
also
do the licensed work. By fulfilling human demands it’s saving
a lot of
time.
For example
, the
first
robot invented in the USA, proved the
world
that the humanoid can do every duty with high accuracy.

Secondly
, robots have
also
got
several disadvantages. On the development of machines
world
is
entirely
dependent on it and is indolent. The human IQ is
also
reducing as they are not even assigning a simpler work to the brain.
Moreover
, the relationship values were completely lost.
For example
, a movie
was released
in 2019, in Malayalam, in which it
showed
how the human ethics
were devastated
by the
use
of robots.

To conclude
, it’s
really
comfortable with the robots as it is lessening our
stress
.
But
at the same time, it’s worsening our families.
So
we should utilize them
in a correct way
and
also
government
should implement
rules
on the usage of gadgets. If these
were followed
, creation of robots would definitely result in a
positive
manner.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement