Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
school should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring, and use film,
School should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring,and use film,TV and computer instead.
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
is considered
that it is more interesting to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
useThis words can be replaced with:undergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
studentsPossible spelling mistake found.appeal
apeealIs this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
iThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
thinkThis phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of allThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCarrying
carryingPossible spelling mistake found.convenient
convienientThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIt
itPossible spelling mistake found.hassletasselHanselpasselKassel
hasselThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have toThe noun should be probably in the singular form: "type"?type
typesFor example
This words can be replaced with:undergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
studentsPossible spelling mistake found.severalseverelyseverally
sevarellPossible spelling mistake found.classesclasslesscl assess
classessThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have toThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
classThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
thatThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMoreover
moreoverPossible spelling mistake found.always
alawaysThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
whenDid you mean "becomes"?becomes
becomeThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterFor
forThis words can be replaced with:various
differentThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSumming
summingIs this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
itruly
believe that technology should be used to teach, that way This words can be replaced with:undergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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