Alex Shapiro

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school should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring, and use film,

School should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring,and use film,TV and computer instead.
School should stop using books for teaching children as they find them boring, and use film, TV and computer instead.
Its
is considered
that it is more interesting to
use
technology to teach
students
at school even if it doesn't
apeeal
to you at all.
i
completely
agree
with this opinion and
think
that teaching by TV and computer is more interesting than book.
First of all
.
carrying
books are not
convienient
to
some
people
.
it
is always a
hassel
as they
have to
carry every
types
of book with them.
For example
students
might have
sevarell
classess
so
have to
carry book for the every
class
.
that
's why books are not suitable to carry around.
moreover
, using computer or TV is
alaways
a way remember the topic.
when
technology is being used for teaching purpose it
become
easier to memorize faster than reading books.
for
instance, when
different
types of picture, slides are used to teach the lesson become easy to learn.
summing
up,
i
truly
believe that technology should be used to teach, that way
students
can learn more interesting way and have fun while studying.
5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement