Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
pie chart leisure activities in europe.
Pie chart Leisure activities in Europe.
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
GivenAs can be
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seenwere interested
in watching TV in the period, however
the rate This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
sawThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someIn 1985, eating out was the second most favored activities and this figure slip to one –third after 10 years. Interesting, talking with family is the same, indicated a
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduceFinally
, in terms of other activities, the rate dropped to 4% from 1985 to 1995.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement
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