Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the bar chart shows the number of visitors to three london museums between 2007 and 2012.
The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates how visited three London museums (Victoria and Albert museum, National gallery and British museum) from 2007 to 2012.
in 2012, while least number was in 2009 and 2010.
above 5 million which increased of the period it became the most visited at the of the period.
Victoria and Albert museum has the highest number of visitors in 2007 at approximately 14 million. This remained constant in 2008 it fell down above half in 2009. In the next year it fell
British museum is the second most preferred in 2007 it became the least visited in both 2008 and 2009.
Visitors rising from 2010 and this became the second most with under 15 million at the of the period.
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleOverall
, most visitors can be This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seenInitially
in 2007, the number of visitors to national gallery was This words can be replaced with:merely
justsignificantly
over the next five years reaching three folds to over 15 million in 2012. This is the least popular museum at This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :embark on the proccess of
startThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
endVictoria and Albert museum has the highest number of visitors in 2007 at approximately 14 million. This remained constant in 2008
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butrapidly
to This words can be replaced with:merely
justslightly
and then increased slowly
for the next two years settling at 10 million in 2012.British museum is the second most preferred in 2007
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butVisitors
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :embarked on the proccess of
startedThis words can be replaced with:well-known
famousThis words can be replaced with:merely
justThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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