Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in uk cities in 2008
The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
The chart illustrates the number of in the UK who most reported problems in 2008.
Belfast to Cardiff with nearly 55%. and training to 54% nearly the same as with London. Following this, we can observe that a plethora of problems with air pollution has Manchester have fewer difficulties with and training.
troubles with health service has Belfast most issues with and training have 2 cities and in Newcastle air is more than other 6 cities.
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peopleOverall
there are 7 cities. Numbers are represented
by percentages.Firstly
, Belfast has the greatest number of nearly 60% problems with health services. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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comesAlso
, Glasgow has fewer amount of problems with health services while they have more problems with This words can be replaced with:disciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudy
educationclosely
to 26% meanwhile locals of Possible spelling mistake found.Manchester
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, issues with air pollution in Newcastle which is less than 10%.Finally
, as This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seenThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butThis words can be replaced with:disciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudy
educationThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement
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