Alex Shapiro
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some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think
Some people think that products should be made to last as long as possible, while others think making the products cheap is more important. Discuss both views and express your own opinion.
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When buying a product, most people weigh up price versus quality. While feel that durability should be the most feature in a product, others give affordability more importance. In this essay, I will examine both views and why and customers need to responsible decisions.
Those who argue that if a product lasted longer, waste could be. their smart-phones for more that 2-3 years and have a tendency to a new one even if it’s not needed. This mentality of disposing a product completion of its lifecycle can lead to unnecessary wastage of raw materials, industrial waste and can cause harm to the nature. If we one smartphone in a decade this impact.
For others, lower prices are more that quality. to cost thousands of dollars, it costs around $300. This means more people have access to these products, which means greater equality and opportunity, to items like cars and electronics.
fashion. While, we can never compromise on the quality of a product, I feel access of it is more . Majority of the population .
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companies6.5
Total Band
6.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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