Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
ou ordered an equipment online.
ou ordered an equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell: give the details about the equipment explain the damage suggest what you want the manager to do.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the Sony Mp3 player which
This product storage capacity of around 15 GB, an Ultra-powerful charger pin, and full-bass headphones. It is quite a Mp3 player for beginners and experts. Most
Once I opened the package the side headphone and charger pin there is no problem.
replace the item or else try to refund the amount. It might be better to refund I was not happy with your service. Here, I attach the item and email address for your reference. If you have any questions, me know.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Santhosh
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the Sony Mp3 player which
was dispatched
yesterday at 7: 30 pm.This product storage capacity of around 15 GB, an Ultra-powerful charger pin, and full-bass headphones. It is quite a
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
goodimportantly
, it is waterproof.Once I opened the package the
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
leftwas damaged
. I was totally
upset at that time. Even this item was not packed well. Moreover
, they forgot to attach the warranty card. Therefore
, it is extremely
difficult to claim the product. However
, I have an order id number This words can be replaced with:therefore
soIn addition
, could you This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
pleaseThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThe usual prepositions to use after "the invoice" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "the invoice for"?the invoice for
the invoice ofThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
pleaseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
letI look forward to hearing from you.
Yours
faithfully
,Santhosh
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
6
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement
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