Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the bar chart below shows the money spent per week on public transport by age group in malaysia
The bar chart below shows the money spent per week on public transport by age group in Malaysia in the year 2008
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
The bar chart the money spent per week on public transport by age group in Malaysia in the year 2008. Transport facilities are Rail, Bus and Taxis.
Moving to age group between 50-65, they taxis more than other two sources, same as previous two age groups, 5. 8 RM spends on taxis, 1. 7 RM on buses and 1. 8 RM on Rails. As we to age group 65 -75, spending on taxis are 2. 9 RM and 1. 6 for the both Buses and Rails. Age group above 75 is they spent less amount of money as compare to other age groups, Taxis -2. 9 RM, Buses-0. 5 RM and Rails. 3.
To encapsulates, The above chart gives information about the spending of from various age groups on transportation facilities. In that taxis are from every age group and then Rails at second.
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, Age group under 30, The money spent by this group is 6. 5 RM per week on taxis and that is
the highest from the overall
graph, then spend 1. 8 RM on buses and 3. 8 on rails. Second, Age group between 30-50 is same like under 30 group with quit difference in sending RM, Taxis-6. 2 RM, Buses-1. 9 RM and Rails-2. 5 RM per week.Moving to age group between 50-65, they
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6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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