Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes.
Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.
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These days individuals believe that the death penalty is a for those who committed forcible crimes while other people say that the death penalty not that the death penalty is a for forcible crimes
, the death penalty can to the plethora of crimes in every country. Most individuals maybe that it's too cruel if we want to violent crimes we treat them criminals are not afraid of prisons, criminals . of the advantages
drawbacks. The death penalty can not be correct or truthful. By this I mean the evidence may not be true, or the punishment, for which innocent people may . of such decisions, people will not trust the and myriad protests may . The evidence suggests that the death of black people in the United States will lead to protests and vandalism of million .
To sum up with everything that has far advantages are overweight disadvantages. I believe that if death penalties will be
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it can be helpful in the future for reducing the number of forcible crimes.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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