Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace.
Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology, this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment.
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is argued
time and again that, the advancement of technology in replacing human workforce are predominantly
evident from 18th century itself. This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Nowis considered
to be a modernized era and technology plays a pivotal role in everyone’s life. It is said
that, the new inventions progressing rapidly
and due to which, unemployment is at higher rate. In this essay, I will elaborate on the facts of both view with appropriate illustrations.Firstly
, there is no doubt that, the technological inventions are This word is normally spelled with hyphen.much-needed
much neededPossible spelling mistake found.inspirein spite
inspiteFor example
, in agriculture farms, the daily routine which was performed
with human efforts are easily
being replaced
by the harvesting machines. Likewise
, with the innovation of ATM machines, lesser number of people are employed
by the banks compared to two decades back, when cash transactions were handled
manually
. This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
TodayPossible spelling mistake. 'digitalisation' is British English.digitalization
digitalisationSecondly
, there are paramount of manual work is already covered by Artificial Intelligence and there are lot more to be replaced
in coming years by the Possible spelling mistake found.RobotsRootsRobot
ROBOTsFinally
, people adopted to the industrial revolution when it was introduced
few centuries back, and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
noware obliged
to adept the new ways of working with modern equipment and artificial intelligence thereby resulting in lack of jobs in This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyTo conclude
with, the machines have become an integral part of our daily routine and this fact is undeniable though This words can be replaced with:a number of
somestill
believe, we cannot completely depend on the innovations.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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