Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture.
Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important for children to be taught art? Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?
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It is be to regular academics for various reasons. that they be a balance maintained between studies and art.
It is essential to teach art to children from a young age it would kindle the creativity and imagination of a child’s brain. Students would have the freedom to explore various colors and this could be one of the methods to express themselves. he watercolors, crayons to express his mood to others.
that children are aware of ancient history and how their country evolved into a democratic or communist nation.
In my opinion, children have a balanced exposure to all fields such as science, literature, and art. Physics and chemistry subjects teach them about the fundamental and essential principles of life such as gravity force and careful usage of various detrimental acids in life. that children’s development will be strong both mentally and obstacles even to calculate simple math in their day-to-day life in the future.
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6.5
Total Band
6.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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