Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
some people believe that cultural traditions destroyed when aim at tourists or it is the only
Some people believe that Cultural traditions destroyed when aim at tourists or it is the only way to save traditions. Discuss both view and give your opinion
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peoplewas damaged
when tourism is oriented
while other person are Consider using a past participle here: "considered".considered
considerThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreealso
explicate the reason behind my gravitation prior to the possible conclusion is reach.To
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
beginfirst
and foremost, the This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
governmentbeen paid
more attention to maintain the sculptures and manuscript of the country to enhance tourism owing to the fact that it aid to generate income from foreign which directly
impact on the per value of currency. As a result
, the administration of nation secure the art and craft of the nation for expanding the amount of revenue. For instance
, a survey conducted by associate of Asia revealed that the rate of sightseer was more where the historical places were protected
by kingdoms.On the top of it, due to escalation of explorer, citizen of the nation pursue studies to understand the base of their community. These studies
are attained
for assisting trippers which directly
impact on their lifestyle. Consequently
, they would be recognized
the quintessentially
of their culture and religion values thatThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterHelp
helpThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
comeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
seeThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
liveare interested
to safe their religious myths.To recapitulate, this easy discussed that more travelers appropriate method rid to look after the morals of communities.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
6
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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