Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the maps demonstrate the islip town centre as it is present plan and various advancements for
The maps demonstrate the Islip town centre as it is present plan and various advancements for future. Overall, the Islip town centre will undergo many alterations such as ring road, reducing park and many more. According to the details, the Northern side west to east so many shops in present after the future plan in west to north bus station, shopping centre and north to east car park and new housing. After that the in middle present main road convert to the pedestrians only. Furthermore, In south side in current situation in shop to west school. However, the change in housing area and other new housing developed and park will be reduced in size. Then again the school area slightly increased in size. On the whole maps in the Islip town centre to cover up the dual carriageway skip the school area and small part of housing area in south side.
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The maps demonstrate the town as it is present plan and various advancements for future. town will undergo alterations such as ring road, reducing park and more. According to the , the Northern side west to east shops in present after the future plan in west to north bus station, shopping and north to east car park and new housing. After that the in middle present main road convert to the pedestrians . situation in shop to west school. in housing area and other new housing developed and park will be in size. Then again the school area town to cover up the dual carriageway skip the school area and part of housing area in south side.
Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
IslipPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreOverall
, the Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
IslipPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
detailsThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyFurthermore
, In south side in This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
currentHowever
, the This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reducedslightly
increased in size. On the whole
maps in the Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
IslipPossible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centreThis words can be replaced with:tiny
small5.5
Total Band
5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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