Alex Shapiro
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these days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time,
These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.
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Nowadays, taking a to or study is becoming people, reasons why moving is popular and challenges to
's by looking at the advantages of moving away. One of the main positives of heading overseas is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by this is that you have the chance to people from cultural backgrounds and learn to cope with foreign customs and food. This can you more rounded as a person.
can lead to a better quality of life. Take British people for the exam. Thousands of people from the UK to Spain and Australia every year. These countries have warmer climates and encourage a better work-life balance. , which may promotion prospects on your return.
Turning to the other side of the argument, culture shock is a major problem. people who take a year out find it to cope with the language barrier, the food, and general cultural differences. This leads to homesickness and in cases a sense of isolation.
Another issue is that it can be difficult to a new life from scratch. , you new friends and find your place in the community. This process takes time and can be
All things considered, starting life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of the better lifestyle, weather, and on, and the cons of culture shock and language barrier.
You used an adverb ('here') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('out') instead of another adjective.
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liveThis words can be replaced with:overseaselsewhereawaytravelingtouring
abroadincreasingly
popular. For This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyespecially
young adults, the chance to spend an extended period of time overseas is an attractive one. However
, there are both pros and cons to deciding to do this. In this essay, I will discuss If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
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abroadThis words can be replaced with:therefore
soIf the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of thebe
overcome
.overcome
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beginThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meetThis words can be replaced with:various
differentThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeSecondly
, moving This words can be replaced with:overseaselsewhereawaytravelingtouring
abroadThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
moveIn addition
, by living Overseas, you can gain qualifications and language This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skillsThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveTurning to the other side of the argument, culture shock is a major problem.
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ManyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hardThis words can be replaced with:frequently
oftenThis words can be replaced with:a number of
someAnother issue is that it can be difficult to
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startIn other words
, when you This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
moveThis words can be replaced with:overseaselsewhereawaytravelingtouring
abroadThis words can be replaced with:ought to
have toThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeespecially
challenging if there is also
a language barrier to deal with.All things considered, starting life in a foreign country is never easy. You need to weigh up the pros of the better lifestyle, weather, and
This words can be replaced with:therefore
soPersonally
, I believe the benefits in terms of personal growth eventually
outweigh any negatives.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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