Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the animal species are becoming exhinct due to human activities on land and in sea what are the
The animal species are becoming exhinct due to human activities on land and in sea what are the reasons and solutions?
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This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyedcertainly
be taken
to tackle the problems. There are two main reasons why animals are disappearing. Firstly
, in This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cutThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keepSecondly
, overfishing is also
responsible for the destruction of aquatic life as This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
ManyPossible spelling mistake found.fromformsfrogsFrommpromsfr oms
fromsare trapped
, which This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviates
reducesPossible spelling mistake found.causing
causinatThis words can be replaced with:a number of
Somebe adopted
to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improvebe grown
while powerful tractors can be applied
to Possible spelling mistake. 'plough' is British English.plow
ploughConsider replacing "in a speedy manner" with the adverb for "speedy"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a speedy mannerthus
a lower demand for clearing more land for crop planting. Another measure is that This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
governmentThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyedIn conclusion
, this essay highlighted that reasons behind this happening are deforestation and overfishing. This essay also
presented that solution to this issue are The adjective or adverb 'twofold' needs to be written as one word.twofold
two fold5.5
Total Band
5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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