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living in your country where you have speak a foreign language can use serious social problems,

living in your country where you have speak a foreign language can use serious social problems,as well as practical problems
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living in your country where you have speak a foreign language can use serious social problems, as well as practical problems
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
Live
in a country where you
This words can be replaced with:ought to
have to
speak
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
other
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "nations'" or "nation's"?nations'nation's
nations
language can
Possible spelling mistake found.reasonresinreconmesonresowresown
reson
This words can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
social effects,
as well
as practical problems.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
people not understand foreign language
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
problems trouble and other side person speak foreign language
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
knowledgeable
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
daily
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
affairs, general knowledge and other data.

Firstly
, our this country living that country people not learn foreign language
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
not understand and social conversation is not
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
good
because other people take other meaning.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
take other words
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
other people
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
not
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
good
and data not
Possible spelling mistake found.verbalviralcerealvernalareal
vairal
several person and not available high quality job.
For example
,
Possible spelling mistake found.Narendra
narendra
Possible spelling mistake found.modemodmodsmoiJodiLodi
modi
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
year ago tea seller
This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
nowadays other countries language knowledgeable
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
all work
perfectly
done.

Secondly
, people know foreign language
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
all
Possible spelling mistake found.virtual
vartual
work as complete to unknown person.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuch
such
as pupils all projects work
clearly
complete and other people were they work completed without any problems.
For example
,
If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Bill Gates
bill gates
know
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
languages
This words can be replaced with:therefore
so
him
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
this platform.

This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using "in my opinion" or "I think".In my opinionI think
According to me
, all person know foreign language because person no difficult any work and high level lifestyle.

To
Possible spelling mistake found.conclude
conclud
,
This words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
social problem generate
as well
as practical problems because all citizens know not foreign language.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement

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