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Alex Shapiro

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IELTS Writing Evaluation

the chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in uk cities in 2008

The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
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The chart below gives some of the most reported issues among people living in UK cities in 2008 (%).
The chart illustrates the number of
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people
in the UK who most reported problems in 2008.
Overall
there are 7 cities. Numbers
are represented
by percentages.

Firstly
, Belfast has the greatest number of nearly 60% problems with health services.
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After
Belfast
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comes
to Cardiff with nearly 55%.
Also
, Glasgow has fewer amount of problems with health services while they have more problems with
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education
and training to 54% nearly the same as with London. Following this, we can observe that a plethora of problems with air pollution has Manchester
closely
to 26% meanwhile locals of
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manchester
have fewer difficulties with
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education
and training.
However
, issues with air pollution in Newcastle which is less than 10%.

Finally
, as
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seen
troubles with health service has Belfast
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but
most issues with
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education
and training have 2 cities and in Newcastle air is more
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clear
than other 6 cities.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement

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