Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange
Requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange
Evaluated by WRTR AI
Dear Mrs Jones. I am writing to inquire about your product, boy's T-shorts which 's clothe shop. sell 's clothes for all seasons. In my shop, and boys can shirts, trousers, jeans, coats T-shorts and shoes. Nowadays, we are going to our products which fit spring and summer. boy's T-shirt from your factory. I black and white T-shirts from your telegram which you sale on the internet and I wanted to contact with you. As you know I would like to have your clothes for my shop. If you contact with me. I would be with you. I have one more question, how of T-shirt can you give me. am my contact numbers with my letter in order to you would like to contact with my shop. Yours
are made
by your factory. I am a businessman and I have This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
menThree successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
IThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
menThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
menThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeConsequently
, I am going to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
sawPossible spelling mistake found.ChanelchannelchapelchancelChaneycPanel
chanelThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfied
pleasedPossible agreement error. The noun piece seems to be countable; consider using: "many pieces".many pieces
many pieceThree successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
IPossible spelling mistake found.unclothingen clothing
enclothingThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makefaithfully
. Sara Brown.
5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange