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requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange

Requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange
Requisting letter to a manufacturer to ask them to arrange
Dear Mrs Jones. I am writing to inquire about your product, boy's T-shorts which
are made
by your factory. I am a businessman and I have
own
men
's clothe shop.
I
sell
men
's clothes for all seasons. In my shop,
men
and boys can
buy
shirts, trousers, jeans, coats T-shorts and shoes. Nowadays, we are going to
change
our products which fit spring and summer.
Consequently
, I am going to
buy
boy's T-shirt from your factory. I
saw
black and white T-shirts from your telegram
chanel
which you
make
sale on the internet and I wanted to contact with you. As you know I would like to have your clothes for my shop. If you contact with me. I would be
pleased
with you. I have one more question, how
many piece
of T-shirt can you give me.
I
am
enclothing
my contact numbers with my letter in order to you would like to
make
contact with my shop. Yours
faithfully
. Sara Brown.
5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement