Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
Without a shadow of a doubt, cars have a pivotal role in the transportation and 's life in this era. In this area, an unanswered question is whether the people will in the future. Despite the arguments asserting that using car decrease in the future, I believe, as do people, this demand will increase as
cars more than past. To be more specific, Not do people cars for transport the car more than one car for showing their luxurious life. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I was young everybody public transportation or bicycle to go to work or other places. . Consider in family, everybody will life easier by using their car and people do not tend to public transportation or carpooling.
Another prominent motive to public transportation. will this their car spend two hours to reach my workplace. the government does not have any plan to solve these problems they request of using car will grow in the
Reflecting upon all the aforementioned reasons, one realizes that car has a crucial role in the near future. incomes are rising all over the world, which means that in the future automobiles will be affordable for even more people. pay attention to public transportation as much as preventing to increase demand for cars.
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peoplebe needed
to cars more and more in the future, or this requirement will This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :modifyalter
changeThis words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyrapidly
as possible. In the following paragraphs, I will illustrate my perspective.First
and foremost, the crux of the matter lies in the fact that the higher quality of lifestyle in the future causes people can afford to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchaseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
useThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
they This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buyThis sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhen
whenThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
usesOn the contrary
, nowadays each person has a car and even this request is going to be more than there are This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
todayThis form is ambiguous and can be used as past tense. Confirm that you are using the intended base form of the main verb after 'to do' as an auxiliary verb..
foundThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
useAnother prominent motive to
be stipulated
is that government does not notice to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improveFurthermore
, environmental research findings confirm that not This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlybe caused
people more confident to This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
useThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
they find it cheaper and safer. For instance
, in my city when I want to go to work I This words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
shouldIn contrast
, I can achieve there in less than 45 minutes by driving my car. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Ifnext
twenty years.Reflecting upon all the aforementioned reasons, one
This words can be replaced with:in the near future
soonThis words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
BecauseBesides
, the government This words can be replaced with:willshallbe going to
should6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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