Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
the main reasons for using social networks?
The main reasons for using social networks ?
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
Based upon studies, it’s obvious that there are lots motives about the of social networks. in modern society. The Internet, the more we can our families together. It is worth to mention if someone far from their family, using social networks is way for him or her to stay in touch with their family.
The second basis motive of utilizing the social media is its potential to provide lots of knowledge, science and for the majority of people. It is a rapid way to inform about the latest and sensational happenings and news. , nowadays people are using lots of contemporary gadgets to know the things inside out. their decisions in a better way. As a consequences getting news and being up to date is
To sum up, as technology has over last century, the importance of using social media in our society is approximately incredible.
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major justification of using social networks such as Internet is its ability to connect us easily
to one another at a relatively
low cost and without having any geographical boundaries. It means the more we This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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onlyThe second basis motive of utilizing the social media is its potential to provide lots of knowledge, science and
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, most of people take advantage of this opportunity to become well-informed about news and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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related to people’s financial situation.To sum up, as technology has
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improved6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6
Task Achievement
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