Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time.
Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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A should manufacture long lasting products or economical products which are cheap for public. Here, I would talk on both the topic. I believe making long lasting products is a good considering the present situations around the globe.
In the world where everything is getting expensive day by day. As the global economy product to last long which is not possible as cheap and on cheaper rates do not have they don’t the value of the money they invested. This is the issue every common has been facing.
much reliable and it can be one time investment for citizens, As it has low maintenance cost and made off good quality material, it manufacturer more trusting for consumer. should focus on making a long running products and try to the cost low as much as possible. people living in poverty cannot afford a costly merchandise.
merits.
This words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryhighly
debated topic which has been running Did you mean "it"?it
isThe verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "company"company
companiesThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make“Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
WhereThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
ideaIn the world where everything is getting expensive day by day. As the global economy
is hit
by the impact of the pandemic, and it is affecting the people in every country. Public tends to invest in the product which they feel is more pocket friendly to them This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expectIt seems that a verb is missing after "it". Please verify.it isit was
italso
made of less costing material. Also
, the maintenance of the cheap product is much higher compared to long running goods. For example
, electronics which people This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buyUse a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).guarantee, and
guarantee andThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
manOn the other hand
, long lasting furnishing is This words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makesThus
, This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companiesThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
AsIn conclusion
, I believe both arguments have their This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownHowever
, long lasting products have upper hand as its more reliable and have low maintenance. Which is a plus point for people living in poverty.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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