
Alex Shapiro
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as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
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Since most adults dedicate a significant amount of their time in their workplace, job satisfaction is why it is impossible to ensure it for every .
To, job satisfaction depends on several factors; salary, job and career advancement to name a few. Money plays a predominant role in job satisfaction. The prime factor which drives people to work is money. No matter how it is to pay their bills and attain their basic needs. In most cases, have their family depend on what they earn. are like to succeed more than who works in a stressful condition. Last not least, promotion is an essential factor in ensuring a delightful career. Most people thrive for career advancement and when they it, they feel
Since job satisfaction is not universal, it is people would find other aspects to complain about. In other words, it is impossible to satisfy all workers.
In the light of arguments I have hitherto considered, this conclusion is evident that, common factors, such as, money, work and future prospects could be influential to job satisfaction, it is impossible for all workers to
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Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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