Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
as most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important
As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?
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crucially
essential to happiness of an individual. In this day, a range of people work under flexible surroundings, while others are exposed
to stressful conditions. In this essay, I am going to discuss contributing factors to job satisfaction and This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
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peopleTo
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beginThis words can be replaced with:statusclimatehabitatsurroundingssetting
environmentcordially
we deny it, most of people work for money This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistsassistances
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someFurthermore
, working This words can be replaced with:statusclimatehabitatsurroundingssetting
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plays a crucial role in terms of contentment. Those who work under a flexible and pleasant and This words can be replaced with:statusclimatehabitatsurroundingssetting
environmentThis words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
getabsolutely
delighted.Since job satisfaction is not universal, it is
simply
unrealistic to define a job perfect and completely satisfactory to all. While This words can be replaced with:a number of
someare unsatisfied
with their job for money, others are complaining about future prospects. Even if both these criteria are met
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butbe satisfied
in their job.
6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
7
Task Achievement
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