Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
tudy the given bar graph below, which is about favourite leisure activities of teenagers in canada,
tudy the given Bar Graph below, which is about Favourite leisure activities of teenagers in Canada, this depicts the types of activities the teenagers (Age 13- 19 years are involved during their leisure time). Write the analytical paragraph in about 100-120 words:
Evaluated by WRTR ORG
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
givenare measured
in pounds sterling.Overall
, it can be This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seenAn analysis of the data
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
showsThis words can be replaced with:merely
justWith regard to perfume, 200000 pounds sterling had been spent by France which was exactly half that of the amount spent on cars.
However
, the highest expenditure 450000 pounds (ca. 204 t) sterlingUnpaired symbol: '(' seems to be missing
)This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen6
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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