Alex Shapiro
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does modern technology make life more convenient or life was better when technology was simple.
Does modern technology make life more convenient or life was better when technology was simple.
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The importance of technology which was always debatable has become more controversial claiming of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, science and technology has made life comfortable. This essay will further elaborate my views for the impact.
the statement and explaining further, the the country technology promotes industry, which generate job opportunities and increases per capita income. the main reason behind this is that technology has made life fast, comfortable and .
Probing, the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that technology is the beneficial for the society. It provides global vision and upgrades the standard of living. Moving further, it is pertinent to mention that technology has created a complete revolution in medical field. Advanced hospitals are increasing; the lifespan of the person expands. fast transport and communication is making the world a global village. Apart from the reasons mentioned above, it can be of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to as conclusion that benefits of technology are great to .
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
nowThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peoplethat is
beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial with Possible agreement error. The noun influence seems to be countable; consider using: "many influences".many influences
many influencePossible spelling mistake. 'favouring' is British English.favoring
favouringThis words can be replaced with:beneficial
positivePossible spelling mistake. 'Analysing' is British English.Analyzing
Analysingfirst
and foremost reason behind this that technology This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makeshighly
progressive, socially
and economically
. Considering the social aspect, it has developed international relations through the internet and fast transportation. Another striking benefit in this regard is that its economic progress is remarkable This words can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
becauseCategorically
discussing, it cannot be This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglected
ignoredThis words can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
veryhighly
Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organisedProbing
Possible spelling mistake found.ahead
alheadDid you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreoverclearly
stated why means are in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favourTo recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to as conclusion that benefits of technology are
indeed
Did you mean "too"?too
toThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore5.5
Total Band
5.5
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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