Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
we are witnessing traffic jams across all over the cities in the world.
We are witnessing traffic jams across all over the cities in the world. Some people say that increasing the price of petrol will help in reducing traffic jam. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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be sold
at higher prices in order to combat with increasing traffic from all around the world. Although I This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agreeon the contrary
I do not This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
seeThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :feasible
workableTo commence, the primary cause for traffic jams are that there are a plethora of vehicles rolling out on the roads. Since everyone wants to commute on their
This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
ownPossible spelling mistake found.transport
tranaportSecondly
, in order to reach at the destination, This words can be replaced with:a number of
someThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rulesfurther
consequently
results in traffic congestion and arrogant Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviourThis words can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
manyThis phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only "to bumper".to bumper
to bumper to bumperHowever
, there are a number of adverse effects of increasing the rates of petrol. Even though
rising rates would not affect people of richer society on the contrary
middle This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
classThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
onlyinternationally
transported fuel would remain unused This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butalso
country ought to face higher fares. Alternative solutions are available to cope with this problem such as car pooling. It Did you mean "is"?is
bebe done
on broader level. This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
GovernmentThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
governmentIn conclusion
, although rolling out of a multitude of vehicles on road cause traffic jams This words can be replaced with:on the contrary
butHowever
, it can be solved
by car pooling or improving the condition of the roads.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
5.5
Task Achievement
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