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some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time.

Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing cheap goods.
A
very
highly
debated topic which has been running
is
should
companies
manufacture long lasting products or
make
economical products which are cheap for public. Here, I would talk on both the topic.
Where
I believe making long lasting products is a good
idea
considering the present situations around the globe.

In the world where everything is getting expensive day by day. As the global economy
is hit
by the impact of the pandemic, and it is affecting the people in every country. Public tends to invest in the product which they feel is more pocket friendly to them
but
also
expect
product to last long which is not possible as
it
cheap and
also
made of less costing material.
Also
, the maintenance of the cheap product is much higher compared to long running goods.
For example
, electronics which people
buy
on cheaper rates do not have
guarantee and
they don’t
get
the value of the money they invested. This is the issue every common
man
has been facing.

On the other hand
, long lasting furnishing is
very
much reliable and it can be one time investment for citizens, As it has low maintenance cost and made off good quality material, it
makes
manufacturer more trusting for consumer.
Thus
,
companies
should focus on making a long running products and try to
keep
the cost low as much as possible.
As
people living in poverty cannot afford a costly merchandise.

In conclusion
, I believe both arguments have their
own
merits.
However
, long lasting products have upper hand as its more reliable and have low maintenance. Which is a plus point for people living in poverty.
6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement