Alex Shapiro
IELTS ExpertIELTS Writing Evaluation
some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful.
Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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commonly
believed that a professional leader plays a vital role in development of a company, while high-quality teamwork is considered
to be critical for thrive of a collaboration. In my view, an effective leader and teamwork can This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeOn the one hand, organizations are not created by a single person or leader. Individual efforts are not
This words can be replaced with:sufficient
enoughThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
peopleThis words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
joinFor instance
, Google is a successful company which is popular for its teamwork in the world.On the other hand
, leaders have an active role in each firm as they are responsible for making essential decisions. Therefore
, a leader guide the whole staff and could This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
makeHowever
, he can deteriorate it by This words can be replaced with:incorect
wrongFor example
, choosing the right supplier or buyers has This words can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
importantMoreover
, leaders set company goals which might be Did you mean "one of"?one of
oneIf the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Steve Jobs
Steve jobsIn conclusion
, teamwork and accurate leadership, both are vital for the growth of organizations. In my perspective, these both are equally
necessary, This words (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :benefitialproduct
good6
Total Band
6
Coherence and Cohesion
5.5
Lexical Resource
6.5
Grammatical Range
6.5
Task Achievement
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